This is my blog page for my English Junior Composition class here at Ohio University.
Tuesday, June 7, 2011
Final Portfolio
Portfolio Cover Letter
Reflective Essay
Job Cover Letter
Resume
Genre Analysis
Writing Guide
Wednesday, May 11, 2011
Swales & Kantz: Research
The next reading was by Kantz, which I did not like because of the length of the article and my lack of time to read everything. In short the article discusses ways in which students can use written sources persuasively. It was a very long article that didnt seem to have any well defined points to me. She suggests that we must interact with the text, rather than just reading and responding or writing. I think this is an interesting notion because I believe that reading and writing is a very apparent interaction and didnt need someone to tell me that. I think ultimately what she is trying to articulate is that students dont always properly use existing research or source material, and therefore dont always provide what the teacher or authority is looking or asking for. It is important to use citations effectively and not over aggressively, and one of the best ways to effectively use a citation is to frame it within your article and use it to sublimate a point or as a contradiction to your current thoughts. Then you must rationalize your reason for its use.
Monday, May 2, 2011
Wednesday, April 27, 2011
Bawarshi; Allen; Magee: Genre Continued
The next article was by Allen and was about rhetorical situations and the 'appearance' of objectivity. The author looks at the writing of scientific papers as engaging in a rhetorical situation, though many people would argue that there is little place for rhetoric in science. His argument is that the writer persuades the audience by the appearance of objectivity. The point of scientific writing is supposed to be about providing unbiased truths or info, he argues that in actuality the 'writer creates an exigence and addresses it through rhetorical strategies that lead to the appearance of objectivity. I found this interesting because scientific writings are meant to provide the public with unbiased scientific data, but it would logically follow that whoever wrote the article is a subjective being. As humans we are unable to entirely separate from our subjectivity when trying to appear objective. I like the quote he uses that says "There is no such thing as unprejudiced observation. Every act of observation we make is biased. What we see or otherwise sense is a function of what we have seen or sensed in the past." I found this to be a very accurate statement. As humans we base everything we encounter on what we know or have previously experienced. When discovering or articulating new findings or data we use our preexisting knowledge of things, our biases, to make sense of it. I think the main point that the author makes in the article is that scientific writings are based on individual interpretation and not necessarily unbiased objective findings.
The last article was by Magee and was about young scholars and college essays. Her focus is on gender and masculinity in college admission essays. Her goal was to examine differences in gender as they correlate to differences in writing. What she found upon examining her and other females admission essays was that the genre of the admission essay seems to be more masculine, even for female writers. It seems that the genre in which we are writing will affect or determine our intended writing style. While gender is an important part of writing, social environment is equally if not more important. She examines the presumption that female writers tend to write about emotions and connections with people while men tend to write about self accomplishments and strengths. She found thought that the essays written by women werent like that at all, they were more 'masculine' in appearance. She claims that this is because the point of the essay is to show why an individual is a good candidate for college and that we individuals know what the college expects of us. So it seems that gender can play an important role in individuality, but when it comes to writing in particular genres we are able to put aside gender differences and create what is neutrally expected of us.
Monday, April 25, 2011
Dirk; Devitt: Genre
Dirk also points out that genres help people accomplish goals, but that they are more of a suggestion and not an assured formula for success. As users of multiple genres we experience overlap between them, where there are even more similarities but nothing is exact or perfect. I liked this article because it made an important distinction that genres act as a framework, not necessarily a strict guideline. They shape our social actions while allowing us to effectively communicate new ideas and conventions.
The other article we read was by Devitt and was also about genre, but more specifically about teaching/learning about critical genre awareness.
Monday, April 18, 2011
Wardle; Johnson, Clark and Burton; Windsor.
The establishment of authority is also crucial in the workplace, and is best understood as " the effect of a posited, perceived or institutionally prescribed asymmetry between speaker and audience that permits certain speakers to command not just the attention but the confidence respect and trust of their audience..." Authority is essential in all forms of communication and is especially important in the work environment. Authority allows us to communicate effectively our ideas and goals and see that they are understood and met. Sometimes however our identity that we have created outside of the workplace may conflict with the needs of authority, but in order to 'get along' we have to conform to the established identity of the workplace and submit to the demands of the authority.
These roles of identity and authority are very important to writing in our respective discourse communities. When establishing an identity with our writing it is important to mold that identity to conform with the needs of the workplace. We must often take on a new identity in the workplace, separate from our social identity. When writing we must know what authority we are able to command, and know what is appropriate.
The next article by Johnson, Clark and Burton is about writing in the field of engineering. The article is written by students and is study of the role of writing in engineering with the goal of bridging the gap between engineering and writing. As students their paper is very approachable and easy to read. It is clearly defined and informative with their authority made present from the beginning. "To analyze how consultants interact with engineering and English students we recorded and transcribed four half-hour consultations." Their points are clearly outlined and addressed and they constantly reaffirm their authority on the experience by saying 'we' referring directly to the fact that the article is written by the three individuals who performed the study.
The other article about writing in engineering is by Windsor, and is substantially more academic. The paper starts with a rather profound quote to quickly establish the authors identity as a knowledgeable authority in the field. The author uses the very general term 'we' and 'our' referring to other respective authorities in the field. The author than continues to establish authority on the subject by prescribing formulaic outlines for writing. The information that is presented throughout the article is presented as fact based on the authority of the author and other scholars like her.
Wednesday, April 13, 2011
Rhetoric and Discourse readings
The second article which was by Boyd was about rhetoric. I think one of the most important things she says is right in the beginning of the article, “choosing how to express your meaning is every bit as important as the message itself.” This really stuck out to me because the obvious point of rhetoric is to make effective and persuasive communication, utilizing figures of speech, metaphors, euphemisms, colloquialisms and other compositional techniques. The idea behind rhetoric is persuasion, and more importantly being able to impress your audience enough to make them take your side on matter. She rather thoroughly explains that the effective use of rhetoric will enable a speaker, or writer, to be able to appeal to an audience on any level whether its logical reason, an appeal to their beliefs, or effectively speaking to their emotions.
I think the importance of reading these articles together is that in order to become a part of Gee’s ‘Discourse’, or as I prefer to call it ‘culture’ or ‘community’, is an effective use of rhetoric along with the facade that you are indeed a member of that group. Effective use of rhetoric can appeal to all sorts of communities, thereby making the orator an accepted member. I don’t think that these communities are as hard to join as Gee would have readers believe. What it really takes is knowledge and experience, passion and dedication, networking and respect. If you can prove that you have these qualities to the particular community of interest they will gladly accept you. People like being with like-minded people, and I don’t think that rhetoric is necessary to appeal to all people or to be a part of their community. I think appropriate manners and a good understanding of the society is the best way to join a community, not rhetoric.
Monday, April 11, 2011
Resume Article
Wednesday, April 6, 2011
Hey. Here is my Linked In page
alright so here is a link to my linkedin professional profile page. Im not really sure what to do here, maybe somebody can give me some advice or some helpful tips.
Williams chapters 8-10 & Klein and Shackelford readings
The second section that I found to be very important from the Design Handbook was about website design. Website design is also very important in the media field, once a potential employer or client had your business card they need someplace to go to examine your work and background. A proper website is a major asset in media and entertainment and can often draw in clients that you haven’t actually met in person. A well designed website for a media professional should include a brief introduction to welcome the viewer and give them some insight as to who you are. A good media website will also contain a portfolio of works and projects so that potential clients can see exactly what you have worked on and are offered samples of what you are capable of doing. Another good section for a professional website is a list of qualifications or awards that show they quality and passion of your work. All of this should be presented in a clear and easily readable format. It is important that a professional website be easy to navigate and be relatively simple in layout because you want viewers to be able to experience all of it without having difficulty engaging in the website.
The article reading by Klein and Shackleford seemed to elaborate on many of the ideas of basic design principles brought up by Robin Williams in her design manual. They too stress the importance of basic structural and visual elements such as contrast, repetition, alignment and proximity but they seem to strive to apply that to every piece of writing, rather than just mainly for formal or professional projects, or even just for sake of creativity. Klein and Shackelford seem much more strict in their approach, stressing precision and formulaic repetition of guidelines whereas the Williams book outlines those ideas but continuously stresses the idea of individual creativity. Klein and Shackelford would have us write everything in a very strict and regulated way, utilizing MLA above all else. I think that this is extremely limiting in that not every thing is written for the same purpose or to the same end. What matters more than anything is context and an appropriate choice in design based on that context. I personally do not use the MLA format for anything, when I use citations I utilize the Chicago Style which I find much more effective and a lot less distracting to my readers.
Monday, April 4, 2011
Response to Willams 1-6
Contrast is a very important visual element because the use of contrasting elements is what initially draws our eyes to the details. The main purpose is to create initial interest in whats being presented. Contrast is also a very effective way of organizing information, assuming that the contrasting elements are unique and meant to be separate from one another. Contrast can be implemented in a number of different ways including changing typeface, font size, color or a variety of other methods.
The use of repetition in visual design is also very useful and effectively strengthens or unifies the main ideas. The main idea being repetition is consistency, so that things that are related appear related and the overall flow or design of a piece doesn’t seem scattered and arbitrary. Repetition of key elements on a page effectively unifies those ideas, connecting them by their importance.
Alignment can be a very useful tool in visual design by creating a visual connection between seemingly unconnected data. The idea of unity is very important in visual design and utilizing effective alignment can connect various elements on a page making them more organized and of seemingly greater importance. The main goal of alignment is effective organization of related materials, while continuing to create contrast between unrelated materials.
The last basic principle that was discussed was the importance of proximity. The idea behind proximity is that elements that are in close proximity to one another become representative of a larger picture or idea, rather than being small individual elements. Items that are related or are of equal importance should be grouped in proximity to each other so that the info is quickly expressed and readily understood. A lack of proximity between related objects can cause confusion and a sense of disorganization. The idea is to organize related elements so that they can be quickly visualized as a whole and more readily understood.
I think that it is important to consider the design of something when creating a document or a visual piece because the difference between something that is well designed and something that isn’t could be the difference between your piece being interesting and understandable, or boring and confusing. I think that when it comes to professional writing design is even more important because often the information that you are trying to get across is of greater importance or significance. In my field of audio production and music design is extremely important because I am often trying to expose people to something that is unfamiliar, and if it doesn’t appear interesting or understandable then people wont take the time to process or understand it.
Wednesday, March 30, 2011
A Bit About Me
Response to first reading assignment
My first reading, which was from The Little Seagull Handbook was about reading strategies and discussed important things to remember when reading something. The section was mostly about reading with a critical eye and highlighted important strategies for reading critically and analyzing the arguments. I found that the book had many good suggestions for reading and it made note of the fact that different texts often require different strategies or different ways to go about reading them thoroughly. I thought that one of the best suggestions it offered was to preview the text, looking through it and getting a basic understanding of the writing style and the ideas. I had never thought of this before, but I can see that it could be very useful in reading critically. Previewing the text allows you to prepare for the rest of the writing but also gives you a brief sense as to what the writings is about. Another suggestion that I found to be very useful was thinking about your initial response to a reading. I know that sometimes when I read things the ideas aren’t always clear to me in the beginning. By writing down initial impressions and then going back over the reading things may become clearer and my understanding or evaluation of the reading might change. The other interesting section of this reading was about analyzing the argument. All written texts present some sort of argument, and as a critical reader looking to obtain the true meaning behind a text it is crucial to understand the argument being made and to determine whether it is logical or not.
My second reading was from the Bunn article How to Read Like a Writer. The article discussed the importance of critical reading and assessment of ideas in the writing process. I think that reading is an essential part of writing because in order to write anything we have to have had some sort of experience, a situation which we read a certain way and are able to discuss through writing. Reading doesn’t have to be just textual but can be experiential as well. The author goes on to say that it is equally important to read and understand an authors technique as it is to understand the textual meaning. I know from experience it can be hard to read something that you are unfamiliar with when you have no basis of the textual information. I feel it can also be difficult when reading a new author or type of writing that is in an unfamiliar style or format. The author of the article explains that the key is to determine what the most crucial information and useful format of the text is. This is important in determening the meaning of a piece as well as analyzing what could have been done differently.
The last reading I did was titled Reading Games and was about strategies for scholarly reading. The main idea of the article is about how sometimes when reading things we aren’t familiar with we tend to skim over sections and gloss over the material often not retaining what was read. The author offers many tips when it comes to readings, but I think the most important for me was the advice about thuroughly reading the abstract sections at the beginning and the conclusion at the end because these are where many of the main points are summed up. If we thuroughly understand these points prior to the full reading we will be more aware and knowledgable about the text and will be able to better understand the information and retain that info after we’ve read it.